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This new character is another big L. He worsened the significance of the npcs/narrative since he showed how easily they can be manipulated using his skill and he got forced into the role of a sidekick by that quest, ending up as fodder for the mc's growth.

I wish this was something more like a death game, but it would be much harder to write a selfish mc in that context. The npcs would be more significant and his craftsmanship would mean the difference of his and other peoples' life and death rather than just progressing in a game. There could be...

I don't like the mc's personality very much. Ranting on the internet and insulting peoples' appearances. He plays pretty selfishly, which is understandable since it seems to be a somewhat competitive game, but also makes it hard to root for him. His tenacity was brought up at one point, but I...

I really dislike the "Oh right, I have a skill to counter this that hasn't been mentioned before" idk how I feel about this literally being a game either. Rather than battling for his life, he's just battling to win a game.

I dropped it here before. It's really pathetic, the mc pussyfooting around and feeling fear because he is an earthling. He lived on a world where he was fighting for his life every day for 22 years, why would he be so incredibly afraid of something not nearly as risky? Not only that, but he...

The number of fantasy elements is pretty absurd. It's hard to follow and it doesn't add anything. The world doesn't feel cohesive and practically anything could happen. The one thing outside the system is the mc's ability. I love that he's such an enigma, but it also makes it ridiculously...

I'm not convinced he can actually die by any means. Judging by what we know so far, he could die from some natural occurrence like falling and breaking his neck, but that's so strange. He's an entity beyond entities beyond gods. He's such an enigma and I love it.

These folks are ridiculously reckless. "He has some kind of instant death ability that we can't understand, so let's attack him to find its weakness"

I can't help but feel that the harem focus is unfortunate. The characters are decently written and it kills their agency. Compare the female characters to the male characters, like Nil, the dragon lord, and the guard guy. They are just walking fanservice fulfilling a harem fantasy. I get it...

That danger sign with a drawing of a dragon is comical

The transformation mask looks absurd like some classic comic book hero

Really mediocre to this point and its only getting worse. The motivations of the antagonists are shallow and most of the characters' reasonings are shallow. The slower paced chapters are built on comedy that falls short. There are too many unnecessary different kinds of power. There are...

"what about using divine power"...seriously? Why wouldnt he have used it in the first place? This writer does love to drag things out.

The past several chapters have felt a bit silly. I was ready for shit to get real after ricky's death, but they're taking things quite slowly. So much politicking and a lack of a feeling of desperation despite the power of the demigods. It seems like the writer is stretching things out. Feels...

Its a bit annoying that he wasn't able to anticipate leyrin's presence. Surely you would think that someone like him would have prepared for that eventuality. Even someone without his knowledge and wisdom would be extremely conscious of such a powerful, looming threat. It makes it seem like he's...

Its funny, I was writing a swordsman mentor character a few days ago who had a line: "swing your sword with the weight of your conviction" Great minds, am I right?

To think of it as an opportunity that lord would reveal his apostle doesn't make sense. Obviously he sees it in his benefit to do so. If anything, it should make you much more cautious.

That was too vague. "We kill all these people because we had to even though we knew it was wrong." Its a one dimensional solution to the problem. I highly doubt the circumstances were so dire that it was the only choice they could make. If they have the power in their organizations to kill tens...

As a romance fan I could see the ending from the first mention of this story like Keima from The World God Only Knows. I don't feel like kd and heretic have been acting very realistically from the get go and the writing hasn't been very subtle. The double speak connections didn't make very much...

Wtf? He has a good side to him? He hasn't shown a single redeeming quality.