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I honestly can't remember who Divan is

Who would have foreseen the easily foreseeable thing? Muh gawd

This kind of story wouldn't be quite complete without some good ol' heresy

D'awwww

Sic itur ad astra

Who would have foreseen such a thing xD Thanks for the chapter!

This story was always silly but it kind of feels like it has gone down hill.

I'm glad you picked this up, although this reads like a bit of a rushed job.

This is great.

It just me or was "Crescent Moon and Doughnuts" a more appealing name than "Doughnuts Under a Crescent Moon"?

Been so long I'm bewildered

What a waste of time. As I said in my original message, @Lambdadelta_Umineko, please recruit a proofreader. I didn't beat around the bush, it was the first thing I said. Me calling the current proofreading level atrocious was the LAST thing I said, because the point wasn't to attack you; it was...

Also, portraying yourself as "not wanting to do this" is manipulative and disingenuous. If you don't want to do something, don't do it. If you think your work is high quality, make your argument on the basis of your work. My work is unlikely to be flawless, but if you want to go to blows, I...

Nothing I said was intended to be nor written as an insult. Everything I said was said with the intent to emphasize that the proofreading quality of the chapter was very low, and that I sincerely hoped you would improve it, or at least improve future releases. In case that wasn't clear, let me...

You need to get a proofreader. Ideally, proofread this chapter and upload the edits. I'd volunteer, but I'm already overloaded. Please look for a proofreader; at least edit a recruiting page into your chapters or use Grammarly or something, because the current proofreading level is atrocious.

I miss the "-desu" the other group added, but this is so much better.

Woosh

Friendly fellow.

@xyzzy no problem with the premise itself, but this chapter specifically had such disorienting dialogue it felt like a seesaw. I don't know if it was translation error or something else but after it got re-uploaded it's more readable, though still by far the weakest chapter in the series thus...

Did anyone else have no idea what the fuck was going on in this chapter? I don't know if it was a translation issue or something else but I was getting something akin to nausea or seasickness while reading it, it was so disorienting.