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Someone please tell me why the art started out so charming, funny, and beautiful....and devolved with every chapter into this offputting.... thing? TvT chapter 1 started off so pretty but...: ahhhhh what is this??? What is THIS?????

The flow of this story is...choppy. So much so that it destroys any sense of tone or dramatic tension, and I honestly don’t feel anything about anything because I can’t tell of this is supposed to be someone’s weird sense of humor or the protagonist is just a 100% plot armored Mary Sue. I’ve...

It’s funny, but the expressions don’t really get through and it’s not really immersive for me.

@SyntheticAi well, now I feel like a dunce. ;v; thanks for letting me know. Sorry!

The last scene DRAGGED on, and the art is ugly, so I’m dropping.

Sniper no sniping, sniper no sniping. Sniper nooo sniping!!!!

Aaaaah I’m blessed with another!!!!

She had it coming~ she had it coming~ she only had herself to blame 😩If you’d have been there. If you’d have seen it. You know that you’d have done the sameee~~ Edit: Oookay, he was a tiny bit touchy feely and loony there for comfort. I’m glad to see her cry and mature a little though. These...

Surprisingly solid story thus far!!

Got to chapter 8, the flow of dialogue is weird and choppy so far, but also some of the scene transitions feel rushed. @-@ I agree with some of the comments here, I feel like the beats of the story are all over the place and it doesn’t know what to concentrate on.

The spookyscans translation is pretty bad, I like the art though. I’m only on chapter two, but I hope it doesn’t turn out bad Bc some of these comments are worrying...

Isn’t this a snipe? Also, hasn’t this chapter already been up?

I’m a little bit disappointed Ellie doesn’t have a redeeming arc though... part of the appeal of the beginning of the story was that even though their parents were evil, Ellie at least was only another child, and the story could have gone anywhere with her once her sister was gone. Instead, she...

THIS IS SO GOOD

@MissCheli Pecccccccccccccccccs

Seeing Jeanette bond with her real dad is kinda wholesome tbh ////////

This is so good!! Agh, poor yu. He must be having flashbacks to recontextualizd his entire childhood rn. I hope he can learn to forgive his sister as someone who was an impressionable child who was easily swayed by the actions and opinions of her sour mother, and now knows better and feels...

I liked it at first but the romance is a ✨problematic✨🌈. [spoiler] The moment he married three different women I was like ???? 😀 the romance is still going? What? And now she’s guarding the three wives of the guy she works for who also lewds after her. Like??? I would stan it much greater if...

They’re both annoying, the ML slightly worse so, but neither as annoying as their lack of chemistry? It’s like reading two eleven year olds interact.

The translation is...pretty bad.