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What happens when the son becomes of age and becomes the hero she fell in love with?

This guy must have the most sensitive back ever if he's able to perfectly understand her writing.

Pressure magic would probably shatter stone, so yeah. thats the weak version.

Wait, what the fuck is this thing's genre? Did they just introduce a death game?

The lack of shading in a lot of these panels sticks out to me. I hope the artist is okay. Might need to take a break.

You really have to pay attention to who's talking because everyone talks in the third person and characters have to be recognized by their silhouettes.

That death was so swift and anticlimactic, fitting for him. But there was no corpse and it just seems kind of jarring imo.

She doesn't care about seeing them nude, she wants to see them undress.

The thing about SFX is that people will only notice them if they're redrawn poorly. I think writing an sfx note to the side of the panel is sufficient. You shouldn't redraw complicated scenes where people will likely not even glance over it.

It's actually nutty that cyany can pretty much keep up with Xie when he's moving at the speed of sound using that technique.

Bunch of sissys can't help but virtue signal, or even worse, actually get offended about the setting in a fantasy world.

On page 4, there's also "Shadown"

Finally some plotting doesn't just amount to, "oh no. I didn't know I couldn't do that, sorry."

The massive amount of holes in this story are distracting. Why is an abused noble, who's never been to a social event, able to outshine everyone at a party through her grace, etiquette, and fashion just because she gained memories of her past life as a farm girl? Where the hell did those skills...

Why the hell did the author swap all of the ranking conventions? He made quest Rank difficulty goes A<B<C and spell strength rank goes 5<4<3<2<1 etc. It's like he just wants to be unique.

Get a new proofreader.

Simo using a scope feels so utterly wrong.

He tested to see if he could create Earthly currency because it showed that he could create a "strategic resource" as long as the world didn't acknowledge it as such. This world's technology is so low that he will be able to produce world changing resources that can easily conquer the world.

"You look like the type to have many women." What the fuck? Did he forget that he threw him in a demon hole for 3 years as pretty much a child? Where would these women be coming from?

That synopsis is misleading, he didn't program the game, he simply played a popular game where you can create your own world. After you finish the game you can let it become public so that others can come in to play (or destroy).