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Nunya fuckin business, that’s what

Damn. Thats a rough moment when he realizes “I really want you to stay with us, but I have to acknowledge that it’s not the right place for you”. It’s honestly portrayed beautifully in this chapter, with him almost running through the entire 5 stages of grief.

Kinda refreshing to see an MC be less-than-righteous, and even more so, be that way willingly, even after it being clearly shown that he knows what he’s doing is wrong. Too many MCs in mangas are either paragons of goodness and light, or the edgy anti-hero willing to do anything to accomplish...

writing like this just boils my shit, man. Why use a flashback? Why not just tell the story normally and keep the beginning, middle, and end in order? Flashbacks are to provide key information that led to the current situation; it’s something that answers the question of “how did we get here”...

What the hell is this!? Clear communication? Two characters talking out their feelings like friggin adults? No cheap misunderstandings to drive the romantic subplots? In this economy!? More of this, please. People who deal with emotions like adults are a huge turn on.

Yknow, they could have avoided all of this if the butler didn’t just shout at them then stand there awkwardly while a misunderstanding happened, and instead actually told them wtf is going on a couple chapters back. Seems a bit lazy on the writing side.

Wait pump the brakes, why is she confused about why he’s not acting like he used to, when she saved him specifically so he wouldn’t turn out that way?

TL kind of a mess tho? Possessives are all fucked, personal pronouns are backwards… cmon.

Yknow that thing that bottom-tier fantasy stories do where they give fantasy names to things that really just don’t need it, and it only ends up making the story more confusing? Yeah, this is that but more yakuza.

what in the kentucky fried fuck did I just read

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Art: Pretty Good Translation: Excellent, thank you for the chapter Story: hooooo boy, lets chat a bit This story is really starting to boil my s***. I can’t even tell who the author thinks the main character is, even in sequences with the main character in it. It’s always Rashta this and Rashta...

I’m losing interest in the plot here. I feel like the author has made Navier into a side character and is trying to weave a complex backstory for why Rashta is acting the way she does.... and it’s starting to wear me down. I just want actual plot development. We’ve been spinning our wheels on...