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Not sure where this is going to go... I hope it doesn't end in a lover's suicide, but it's certainly getting all introspective about things.

Well... I was not expecting the "Landmine" to be the less concerning of the two. Jesus the backstory of the influencer gal has some dark implications.

Mindbending concept, very existential.

disjointed is putting it mildly, this doesn't have a functional ending.

This is completely batshit insane. Not necessarily a bad thing, but go in knowing that.

The balance of this one seems... off. I get that it's contrasting them bickering with being lovey dovey, but it seems to be waaaay more bicker than affection, to say nothing of it feeling pretty one-sided, one side being far more invested than the other. There's a thin line between Tsundere and...

The dialogue seems very stiff, Utilitarian almost.

it's only the first chapter, divining the sum total of all character development in a series from the pilot seems a little premature. And different people process stimuli differently besides, to say nothing of the fact that they've been in the woods for three days, subsisting on bad food and...

genderswap and girls love together? Finally, some good fuckin' food.

Also, the repeated physical beatings are just... not actually funny.

Some of the translation choices are... a little peculiar. In particular, it sticks out to me when the queer cast members refer to Straight people as "normal" sometimes including the airquotes, sometimes not. I can't help but wonder if this is a more clunkily literal translation of some queer...

Or they don't turn back and just get sexually bullied by all the Gyarus, that works too. :V

Well, that escalated quickly.

I wonder... do they even have the ability to deactivate that feminization skill, or are they stuck like that.

I get what you're going for with the dialect, but I don't think it really lands properly. Also, I hope the author intends for the arguments of captain bodypart-stealer to be comparable to a poor man's MCU Thanos, because he's just as incorrect about everything as that tosser. It has a similar...

hmm... this is an odd mix of depressing and deliberately abrasive characters.

This is amazing, Yandere villainess, genre-savvy commoner, and clueless maid.

hmm... this has Yuri potential depending on how the vibe shakes out when the swordswoman meets the princess.

This is an unapologetically trashy story, and there's a place for that, thinly written as it is, but the translation isn't doing the writing that is there any favors.

Well that ended rather abruptly.