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This was weird and the structure was unnecessary

There are flares all over the fckn place

He keeps telling her violence isn't the answer and then it turns out it actually is...she's gonna break eventually

Why did y'all pick this up when it's already so far

At this point he's just a normal guy from this world with some attitude cause he's pretty much everyone's btch

Some of the sentences in this is bad

Why upload it if it's unreadable

This man is weak and yes u cud say his oppnonts are strong but let's be honest the stronger his opponents get the more u realize he doesn't get stronger...cause every fight with someone stronger doesn't encourage him to get stronger...he jus barely wins cause of a pill or some shit then moves on...

@sling just send it for them so they cud reupload it and give u credit...maybe they'll let u do some more with them

1. This art is awful now 2. I don't think he's gonna join u after u said he wasn't worth it and only asked him to join in order to keep the other guy

I don't think he's a real pureblood cause then then term pureblood wud be so weak otherwise. I also don't think u can become a pureblood if not born one cause then it would make pureblood not as special but thats jus assumptions

Is the mc strong or not

I don't think I care bout this chick enough to want multiple chapters for a backstory cause this chapter told me as much as last chapter "something bad happened"

This chapter thought me that demons can have kids with humans....ok then

Nice attempt by this is hard to read...don't snipe

So in this business they allow people to steal your pick like that...seems like a place ppl wouldn't trust but ay plot

I feel like it gonna be a slow one

I'm skeptical about whether I like this or not cause the entire premise is is great but the but punches were only funny for a while so hopefully that's not the entire theme from here on

Finally some serious cultivation

I think he's just sticking to his ideals and not changing it jus cause life drew him a bad card and the world ain't pretty...its what u do not what others do but it's jus my opinion @TheElectricalSnakeTamer