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  1. MontDilanus1343

    Kawaii Kanojo-chan - Ch. 24

    Nokia 3310 is not considered Less-Than-Lethal force.
  2. MontDilanus1343

    Girls Who Get It - Ch. 3

    Burst discs for MRLS are nothing new. Only fighter planes use pod bay doors. And that's for radar/detectability reasons.
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    Itoko no Oneechan ni wa Natsukanai! - Oneshot

    It ends too early to have any "Catharsis" in dramatic terms of structure. I actually feel sorry for the kid, he's basically being tortured. But the art is nice, and the cousin literally oozes off the page. So good for artist, bad for manga editor. Maybe it was a serialization pitch.
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    Kioku Soushitsu no Ore ni wa Kanojo ga Iru Rashii - Oneshot

    10¥ says she caused the traffic accident/memory loss.
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    Ningen ni Koisuru Shinigami-chan - Vol. 1 Ch. 17 - Let's Do Fireworks!

    What's messing it up is the "starburst" pattern from her right hand sleeve... ....crossing over into the left hand sleeve. This appears to be a pattern brush error. That one element is enough to throw off perspective, and freak out your brain. I've made a slight edit, so you can see what just a...
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    Akuyaku Reijou Tensei Oji-san - Vol. 3 Ch. 17 - Let's Work at The Duke House

    I don't buy the tickle-down economic theory purveyed here. There's a reason elitist monarchies lead to significant stagnation in cultural and economic development. I'm not saying "Capitalism, ho!" or anything of the sort. But the way people have been indoctrinated to portray by-blood class...
  7. MontDilanus1343

    Dondon Kawatteiku Giri no Ani to Imouto - Ch. 3

    Oof. That hits real. :fml:
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    A Banished Sage’s Progress to Discovering the World: The Story of What Happened When I Freed Myself from My Childhood Friend - Ch. 36 - "Speed of Sou…

    Don't read science fiction by someone who has refused to go to school. Don't read action adventure written by someone who hasn't been outside.
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    Tsuihou no Kenja, Sekai wo Shiru ~Osanajimi Yuusha no Atsuryoku kara Nigete Jiyuu ni Natta Ore~ - Ch. 35 - Intruder

    "Code of ethics". If a bandit is _____ing your family in front of you, or a panther is mauling your face. And you're seriously asking if killing them makes you a bad guy. That's not "Code of ethics". That's "Stupidity incompatible with life". Authors like this really need to pull their head...
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    S-kyuu Guild wo Tsuihousareta kedo, Jitsu wa Ore dake Dragon no Kotoba ga Wakaru no de, Kidzuita Toki ni wa Ryuu Kishi no Chouten wo Kiwametemashita …

    I read the WN, got bored, tuned out. Going to make you all miserable like me. Yes. In the WN, they receive a deep and profound sense of fulfillment. The form varies per dragon. It's more of a transitory feeling though like getting drunk. Nothing plot-affecting. No, Chris is Chris. A massive...
  11. MontDilanus1343

    In the Land of Leadale - Vol. 4 Ch. 18.5

    Now you know why Cayena flipped the F out when her grandson called the village inn "poor". He insulted the loli. And the price must be DEATH! :worry:
  12. MontDilanus1343

    Hero of Time - Ch. 5

    I'm dreading the "curse" the shinigami threatened. Will he never find success? Or will each path succeed, yet yield a new failure? Pls no more pregnant wife killing. :meguuusad:
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    The World's Fastest Level Up! - Vol. 4 Ch. 19

    [Kermit:] "First of all, lower your voice."
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    In the Land of Leadale - Vol. 4 Ch. 17

    You actually bring up a very good point. And I'll concede on that. "How does (in-this-fictional-work) extended VR use affect the neurochemistry of adults vs children?" We already see how video gaming/social interaction can alter/warp(?) physical and mental social interactions. COVID sort of...
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    The Male Lead's Nephew Loves Me So Much - Ch. 32

    What's with these shitty parents of nobility. You'd think the political elite would ensure their kids weren't deformed and crippled at the starting line of the race of life. Instead in all these manga/manhwa they act worse than a family in poverty. I guess artificial drama won't create itself.
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    Ane ga Kensei de Imouto ga Kenja de - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Lifanel Debuts

    Last page: how does Lifanel's middle pant section stand up?!? Is this like that one joke comic explaining how dress shirts stick to underboob? FMC's mother heavily starching, and ironing it, against a body-form mannequin?
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    Everyone Is from Another World, Except Me!? - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

    Naive! I use your MC denseness card to take action "fill in the moat". And add the "cohabitation" modifier. Add +1 to surprise catgirl blanket sneaking into bed in morning.
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