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@TSP Thanks for posting the chapter. You have a synonym issue on page 3 I couldn't bare so many dying like that -> I couldn't bear so many dying like that. The use of bear in this case is verb endure.

Amazing work putting those spreads together!

@ScarecrowB Pg 28, "say" has given you trouble: We don't have a saying in it ---> We don't have a say in it. and Don't says such unreasonable things. --> Don't say such unreasonable things

@ScarecrowB Pg 4 has a super awkward sentence "My parents too went to...." Try this instead "My parents went to live in the city too, so it's just been me and grandma all this time" also, please ditch the all caps font.

@bigguy4u Thanks for bringing this to us. Pg 7 you're missing a word. "wait, when did see that" ==> wait when did you see that

@TSHH thanks for the chptr, however..pg 2......humas -> human's and pg7 hrer->here

@G-P Thanks for not leaving us hanging. Please keep up the good work.

@freylan thanks for the chapter. Small typo: I wonder if you wil return -> I wonder if you will return

Re: motorcycle She's on the big island of HI, the Triumph is a rental. Although I agree that the Z is probably dead. Great book and thanks to Squiggles for doing it.

@squigglesjp On pg 7 when she's talking about the engine, Im sure "the cogs are not loose either" was an accurate translation. However no motorcyclist who works on their own bike would ever say that. They would say "The cams look fine too" or something similar. I chalk it up to the mangaka...

@squigglesjp Thanks for doing this manga. You dropped the "e" off of "here" on page 21. While im her -> while im here.

@RonBWL Love the chapter. Typo on page 13 Same goes for every Staruday--> Saturday

Ive been healed.

Ah, my copy of the Tank didn't have the TOC. Now it becomes clear.

Are you going to make the extras chptr 0 or roll em with the color pages?

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@tshh Thanks for the chapter Some suggestions pg 5 "How comes.. " -> "How come.." Strenght -> strength "Gives them such a freedom of agency" -> "Gives them such freedom of agency" and really you could drop the "of agency" part and it would be fine. pg 7 "That I challenged her for fight...

@sova That was awesome! thanks for bringing us that.

@sova Thank you for the chapter. Page 2 gathers->gather

@squigglesjp Page 19 Don't feel reserve --> Don't feel reserved. OR Don't be so reserved and this | \/