The MC seems a little stiff and boring whips out old reliable the nail that sticks out hammered down mentality
But the sisters make up for it, lets see if this keeps me
This story is SOLID his motives and being able to relate make sense and why her problems would resonate so deeply. The shipping is smooth too
"And Look Ma' no hands and no darlin' I don't dance"
I was considering making a joke about how this guy has eagle vision to see the phone but considering the drop he was about to jump maybe he is an Assassin...