I think this would be better without the whole magic thing.
I honestly care about the daughter and her relationship now, but at the same time, I feel like it will be this generic for a long time.
The manga has a good start, I would love it more if the MC's magic is not OP, just normal, and he is...
What with the page order ...
I may read this again jn order to understand the story and who is who
Edit: after re-read, I realize it was not hard to understand, but I still have no idea who is who, and what happened on page 32
Any help?