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@Maiorem You fail to read so many of my posts and so much of what I wrote. Is scifi or fantasy the only genres that I know? First, totally irrelevant. Your question is completely unimportant to this topic. Second, if you actually read, I gave other examples that are not in scifi or fantasy. I...

@kylie_aliah I'm trying not to seem overly antagonistic, but I have to disagree. Human emotions are somewhat irrational, not totally irrational. Imagine if the brother didn't care about money, was in a loving relationship with his parents, and then got told that his parents were dead. Now...

@ilaya I'm guessing you're calling me the phony. If not, ignore my comment. You couldn't even read what I actually wrote, which is ironic because I wrote about what is good and bad writing. It doesn't matter if it's theoretically/psychologically possible. The brother could've had an aneurysm at...

@rebel16 I could honestly say the same about you. You're acting like you're so obviously right when you didn't even respond to the points that I had made. That's just being sad.

@rebel16 Comment one by rebel16: specifically talks only about depression. Comment two by rebel16: furious covering of their ass by talking about other issues such as sudden and incongruous fits of rage that was never mentioned in the first comment even though it would totally be expected that...

@Maiorem Okay, fine, the realm of "reasonable expectation". Let's say we have a normal high-school series, slice of life, school life, etc. Then, on chapter 45, gravity suddenly turns off, and completely separately, animals reveal that they've been able to talk all along. No foreshadowing. No...

I honestly thought the chapter was mostly fine right up until the end, when he starts talking about it being a gamble and then attempts the impossible mission. The rest was generally fine, but the end packed in three quick scenes with little explanation: his gamble, "the other one is" from that...

@rebel16 Sounds like you're missing how depression develops. It is very abnormal for it to onset this quickly, from the moment of the phone call to slapping the sister and being unrepentant about it. If the brother had slapped the sister and then acted surprised at his own action and then later...

@Maiorem Refer back to my earlier post where I talked about how a person could get upset that their food was thrown out and therefore they decide to wipe out all of humanity. That "is reasonable to think that it is quite possible for a person" to do that. For all I know, that has actually...

It feels like the artwork changed slightly? Maybe it's just me.

@satsukj I'm sorry for your loss. If you don't mind, then, I'd like to ask you. Let's assume that there is no deeper reason here, that their parents passed, and immediately after the phone call that he got, he turned around and slapped the sister that he had previously been so caring towards...

@Oured I wrote in another comment about how I actually think this is really bad writing specifically because of how the biological brother is portrayed. While I understand your optimisim and actually support it, I doubt that the author is going to be good enough to get out of the hole that...

@Oured You're missing the fact that it was not blood relation alone. He was legitimately kind to her for years before their parents died. Then, suddenly, magically, he turns into an ass after he learns that they passed. However, that doesn't negate the fact that his relationship with her is not...

@Raydnt If anything, you're the one trying to start crap by making an empty comment. I wrote reasons. I gave my opinion. You come in here like herp derp, troll, herp derp. Is it so hard for you to believe that someone actually thinks that this is bad writing and that they actually gave reasons...

@Raydnt Shitty comment that can't respond to actual reasons is obvious. I've been using this account for a while. If you're going to be lazy and boring and not even respond to what I write, then what's the point in you posting?

This looks like such extremely bad writing. As forced as possible just to be as dramatic and get as many cheap tears as possible. Everything is pointing to the biological older brother being like that because people were trying to get to the money left behind to the two siblings. That's the...

@koikun Maybe because the author of this one doesn't do as much fan-service extra art? I would not be surprised if that's actually the reason.

It didn't explain why she was outside, next to the dumpsters, when it was raining. I mean, I guess that it could've suddenly started thundering when she was outside...dumping trash, just like the MC. It just seems like poor writing to not give a simple sentence to explain it.

I've been thinking this for a while, but it's really sad if Japanese copyright laws 1) makes people write something like "RINE" instead of "LINE" to avoid getting sued and 2) enables people to just write "RINE" instead of "LINE" to avoid getting sued. That's really shitty laws if that's true.

1) I missed this. Thank you to the translators. 2) I'm pretty sure -sama is a Japanese suffix, not Chinese. Kind of looks cheap to have that. I might be wrong. Ignore me if so.