Translation is pretty decent, only real thing that I kept like stopping at is the use of "mine" instead of "my" which is the correct one. Otherwise, its pretty good
Appreciate the release but you need to work on the grammar for the translations. It currently appears like you're just using google translate to translate word by word which is honestly extremely bad.
If possible, get someone that speaks English either natively or has a good understanding of...
You guys might need someone to proof read ya stuff, appreciate all the work gone into this but I get stuck in nearly every bubble due to grammar (Yes, I am one of those people. I struggle seeing incorrect grammar if I know about it .-. )