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    I Don't Know Which Is Love - Vol. 3 Ch. 22

    Definitely an unbelievable play. Also, new tsundere route unlocked. (As if anyone didn’t see that coming.)
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    Odoriba ni Skirt ga naru - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - Quartet

    Agreed. She’s definitely done something bad, but she clearly regrets it immediately. Also, I feel like people aren’t considering that she’s a hormonal teenager in love. They’re not exactly known for making the best decisions.
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    Why rabbits came from the moon - Oneshot

    What was that bit about the moon’s sky having different stars in it?
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    Witch Guild Fantasia - Ch. 8 - Albus

    Feedback: Translation is fine, I think? I don’t feel qualified to assess it, but I didn’t notice any obvious problems. Font size is definitely too small (I’m reading on mobile). It looks like there’s plenty of empty space in the speech/text bubbles, so I would make that larger. I also think the...
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    November Song - Oneshot

    Okay, that whole photo album sequence is one of the best things I’ve seen in a yuri manga, or romance manga in general.
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    Onna Tomodachi to Kekkon Shitemita - Vol. 4 Ch. 29 - Things that change little by little

    Ahhhh, I love this series so much, but it’s torture when an already slow burn releases this slowly.
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 46

    A little excessive with the monologue, maybe, but otherwise handled surprisingly well. Looks like Mihate’s not 100% certain on his gender identity at the moment, but that’s alright. His mom getting an updated picture of him on her phone was really sweet. Now, I wonder if she picked up on the...
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 45

    I agree that the story is pretty trans-coded. But I’d say that it’s just partly because there’s a lot of similarities between femboys and trans girls, and Hiura’s been kind of straddling that line. I could really see this going either way. Now, Hiura’s parents both being trans is a wild...
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 45

    Wow, they went all in, huh? I actually don’t mind a bit of drama around this, as long as it’s resolved in a satisfying way. I don’t really trust most authors to pull that off, though…
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 44

    Is this… progress? Do I dare to dream?
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    Nijika's Sleep Rescue - Oneshot

    Hiroi in the attic was pretty weird and felt a bit out of character. Apart from that, this was really cute.
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    Witch Guild Fantasia - Ch. 7 - NyoroNyoro

    Thank you for picking this up. I had completely forgotten about it.
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    Atashi no Senpai - Vol. 1 Ch. 13 - Graduation

    It’s more like anticipating either a trainwreck or a really close shave, but instead we cut to people getting off the train at next platform, completely skipping over the resolution.
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 43.1

    Prunus Girl was pretty fun and cute, but I definitely prefer the way this manga handles the world outside of named characters. Not that this manga handles it particularly well (minor side-characters barely even show up), but I think that was a big weak point in Prunus Girl. Definitely still...
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 43

    When are these two dumbasses finally going to realize that they’re already dating?
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    Snow Thaw & Love Letter - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Invisible Distance

    This whole “prince” thing is definitely the weakest part of the story. I don’t know why authors keep doing this sort of thing; Giving one of their leads an entire fanclub that worships them… It makes it feel like every side-character’s life revolves around whatever the MC is doing, instead of...
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    Doushitara Osananajimi ♀️ no Kanojo ni Naremasu Ka!? - Vol. 3 Ch. 14

    I agree with you on principle, but the story needs to actually be structured around that sort of ending. It worked in , and I think it could definitely work in I don’t see it working here.
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Vol. 5 Ch. 40

    At this point, who isn’t on to them? Except for the two lovebirds themselves, of course.
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    Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Ch. 39.5

    “Congratulations, you played yourself.”
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