Godd the author went so roundabout making hina win if she had outright done a ending where he marries them both or something like that it would have been better
There is nothing wrong with your translation ignore those idiots who say otherwise
Im sad that you are dropping this and dont want you to but it's your call if you cant keep up with it will wait for another tl to pick it up
Thanks for translating this manga hope you have good days ahead of you
The translation is way better if you compare it to part time immortal i hope someone else pick it up or at least they start paying attention to the translation