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Why is this FMC assuming ML is gay? Theres misreadings then theres this level of delusion to create fake drama of when will they know the ML's real identity.....

I'm like why didnt she tell Fran she knew her parents? Sure it maybe a sore and painful to bring it up but better then coming off as a literal stalker.

This really didnt need to be a full chapter, too much repeated info thats either obvious or essentially explaibed already.

I just still can't get how Fran had to prove her worth here like this when the guild and multiple members saw her solo a dungeon and a B rank demon and come out relatively uninjured and yet rumor spreads she's just a faker?

This is really dumb, FMC being targetted by a party doing a rank up test feels like they should be not only auto failed for said test but removed from the guild. Why would you want people unafraid of attacking allies for percieved issues that are unconfirmed.

Why bother trying to stop her killing a delimbed enemy? Hes already gonna die, this isnt a moral issue here. Throwing in these mirals here makes literally 0 sense considering he's had no issues with her killing other sapient things.

This has a plothole, merc admitted to selling people to slavers which we know is illegal.... in a room of civvies and guild employees no less.

You know on reread, why is tye first guy to die make it so fran can move but doesnt break the shackles? If the contract is the driving force of everything then she should have died as the other guy had said contract.

Why does this chapter feel both lacking in content but at the same time overly too fast paced..... Narritively what was the point of having them being interupted during the exam if your just gonna blow past it all and show nothing of the consequences? May aswell have just had them being ambushed...

I duno anyone else feel like they read this story before?

So no repercussions to the fake potion seller? Boooooooo. Also why in all that is holy would a commoner have a suitable nobility dress to see the king the next day? There is some awful stretches here to make it all work. Also whats the bet fake potion maker will switch out the potions to use her...

Why do I feel this green haired chick is gonna get away with all this with a slap on the wrist at best? I hate these stupid drama plot points. This whole town would know the FMC plus once that potion showed it did nothing I'm amazed she wasn't lynched for selling what is probably watered down fakes.

So how long until Hero ends up being a white lotus type?

Oh no, slave trope, future slave dog girl lover/harem member trope. This really is running the gauntlet for my most hated tropes.

Ooft not a great start honestly, not unreadable but like a 4/10 also LN has Harem and romance tags fyi peeps.

Why would mc not just remove tye demon? Why talk about leaving well enough alone when its shown the master was killing people.

Man I think I'm seeing why on reread why I originally just stopped reading this. It really is awful writing and criminally short.

How is MC beautiful? He's like a dead fish.

Geh talk about stupid, why not just take out those trying to KILL you, you dont know that they cant 100%. A stupid thing is why was he reincsrnated with a body thats hated, in the middle of a deadly dungeon without telling him oh I dunno get limit breaker. Another thing is why MC who...

So on reread, this all makes no sense and I dunno why I didnt pick it up the first time. MC says he doesnt wanna be a mooch to elf girl but yet his life dream was to be a mooch king not doing anything..... this makes his characterisation even worse then I remembered. I threatened to drop on...