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I really like the concept and I like how ML has disney princess powers. However, it is incredibly slow and really poorly written lol the first joke caught me off guard as well, because everything was so very serious and then suddenly there's comedy. I wish it was written better because the...

Very messy pace, confusing characters that arent likeable. It looks like the story doesnt advance, it looks stuck in the same place for ages with how much they repeat things. All the story so far would have fit in under 10 chapters, but it took more than 30. I will keep reading to see if it goes...