My finger's always on the trigger, ready to drop a series when it does weird shit. I'd rather sit staring into space than give those tropes any headspace.
Thanks for picking this up.
I did want to make a case for leaving the scene with 3 "Awesome!"s as they were written. It's a relatively common gag, where a character maintains a reaction through a number of scenes. Your edit also conveys how the character is continually excited. But repeating the...
Yeah, this fuckin sucks. A demon controlling minds is fine if cliche. A sister so yandere she wants to kill anyone her brother looks at or even the entire world is shite.
What's Kiel's issue with going to Neil City? Why does he care about their route at all besides the fact that he's the "priest" class? Is there some context I'm missing?
That receptionist isn't any kind of -dere, she's just a dick. I don't get the sense she was trying to shock him back to normalcy, she just actively is that way. And it sucks
I'm thinking Justus used up game Harold because he was a little shithead. But he was inspired by the rationale behind the actions of this new Harold, and is genuinely trying to help him.
This is astounding. It manages to never surprise or do anything interesting. If it looks like something is a certain way, there will be no motion to subvert your expectations.
The most 5 out of 10 work I've ever ingested.
Yeah, there's some slowly unfolding mystery about a world heritage on par with the Space Empire we're aware of. Maybe this was a special ops planet to breed weirdos, who knows.