It looks good and has a low starting point, but shows a potential to be a normal, if not better, read. Characters have more than 2 braincells, so that's something.
I give props to establishing the scene, but fail it in military tactics. Their warfare is utterly absurd.
Edit: I put url instead of spoiler for some reason.
@Amariithynar Friend, I believe we're on the same page, but you're misunderstanding me. I have to say I worded it terribly. I am not saying job security is bad. The level of job security is bad as a prostitute. Of the many customers the JK experienced, she was forced to endure for her wages and...
@DjAlexDubCheck My definition of job security is having a safe job you can consistently work. Usually, it means continuity in employment.
@Amariithynar I believe job security is bad as a prostitute, especially in the JK's setting of another world. You don't know if a pimp is having a bad day...
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The U.S. is also a joke when it comes to child brides and sexual exploitation of minors. Kids as young as 9 get married and get raped without knowing what is happening. Around 3 years ago, about 20 states had laws with exceptions to allow child brides. Some states prevented...