Page 38, I think there is a missing word for the top right side of the top right panel. "Spirits don't usually consume human" is ominous af. You really need to get a proofreader.
The description is literally a time paradox. The child is trying to stop the parents from coming together but if she manage to do it, she will cease to exist, which then loops back to the parents getting together, and then repeat.
Money is her main priority. Well, was. Now is just surviving. And you damn well know you can't just quit in the middle of a fucking war. You'd get killed for trying to do so by the higher ups.
Those people don't deserve mercy. It's good that they died. It's like how our world sometimes don't put child molesters and rapists on death row so someone else decides to kill them.
Page 14. Bottom right panel. Any VR full dive game with functioning taste senses will be a big major hit with people who care about their weight, which would mainly be females.