man real shit... the author couldve played around with the alchemy girls power and done something cool when she got captured, i mean the set up of her being so eerily calm made it like shes gonna body them, but nah. ill keep reading but man truly im disappointed on that one.
good luck mayn. thanks for everythin on this one ^^
as for the other fella, zoomer slang on stories isnt really good... they tried to, its comendable... but executing it without the cringe? man thats gonna be hard.