My hopes were dashed... her whatever attitude doesn't add up with her supposedly smart side, I'm sorry. Actually, I don't even know why I thought she was smart in the first place now lol
Wait..she's smart and witty but you're telling me she doesn't know why this is a bad idea? Hello?! There better be an explanation for this lmao. I've been trying not to make judgmental comments so far but I finally gave in.
Other than that, I'm not sure if I like where this story is going...
That really sucks. :( Can't understand why a story like this would get axed when there's a ton of terrible stories out there getting tons of views. Thanks for working on it though, at least we got to read abit of it!
@Thifa Yeah, since the author went out of their way to show that character, I wanted to see how he would've felt. It does feel unfair to the readers. (Thanks, it's great isn't it? 😄 I've used it so many years now)
This looks like a promising fun and light story. My only complaint is that the pacing is really slow and doesn't get to the point for ages. Hopefully it picks up the pace later on.