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  1. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    There you go! I know it's quite a bit, sorry! But, I... I don't want it to end up like so many of my other stories collecting dust. Even if it's never seen, or even hated, I want this one, for it to live on in some way. I don't think I'll return to this story, at least not for a good many...
  2. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Last of It! He smirked and for the first time in his life paid for a drink, with none other than his own helm. His face harrowing, no nose, it was more a skull despite muscle and flesh, and two eyes only with a small black pupil which glared to the champions with anger. ‘What kind of man...
  3. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Only One more chunk after this I think! I suppose I'm being harsh on the chapter, it isn't too bad. I'm a rough self-critic. I believed this entire story was a bit too simple in some ways. It's ending is kind of cheesy as well, but I felt it was perfect at the time. Ever by their side he...
  4. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Almost 5 pages here; I came up with the Shiel'Dye system during this second pass. Saya was meant to be heavily overpowered, and while I admire strong women, I do feel how I painted her originally and a bit here is quite erotic, which wasn't the total intention, she is beautiful, she's suppose to...
  5. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Two more; You know, I actually made a webnovel account, but got Kinda scared, the creator dashboard showed so much, there's even groups and classes. It was intimidating! XD I know I must face that stuff eventually, but it felt like another wall, plus I'm no artist and the story needed a cover to...
  6. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Three Pages this Time, let's go! ‘Hind, that is his name’ Saya would say. ‘There’re only two men in the entire world with merit in my eyes… Him and you. He is much like you, allowing the logic of reality define him… He has yet to break forth and be a fool. Fools are Legends.’ ‘I’m Seven!’...
  7. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    The Next Two! I forgot about the strong words I use in some places heh, Saya is supposed to be real brash and foolish sometimes, though I don't know how that'll go on these forums! Whatever! Saya seemed quite the sad being to him, Minnand. He wondered and wished too not to wonder of what she...
  8. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Next One! We'll try two! ‘Your name is Saya?’ Minnand would wish for clarification, for woe had swayed him for a moment. ‘That’s a pleasant name… I’m sorry this place is not so pleasant… But, I’m sure if you looked about, you may find some of your people! I would look for my mother… But, the...
  9. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Next Page here, since the forums freak out when I try to put full chunks! A Boy and his Horse would be the ones who finally thought of something other than themselves. It almost seemed as if those who passed had taken everything from her, save her black undergarments. So he was careful when he...
  10. kohelemon

    Biggest Chunk of Writing You'll get from me for some time!| Full Chapter! 20+ pages

    Alrighty, I might just regret this later when I'm thinking clear. But, sadly, though I love this story immensely, and finished it's first form, I decided to focus down another story I have my full heart in. So, here's the fully edited chapter! It used to be just 5 pages, but after finishing the...
  11. kohelemon

    Tell us, what's bothering you ?

    UPDATE on the sickness.... I thought i was getting better, but i feel the strangest i've felt in all my life. I felt cold all day, and finally warmed up... Now i feel... like i'm... dizzy... really dizzy... and focused... and dizzy... I haven't eaten all day except for a bit of ice cream... And...
  12. kohelemon

    Tell us, what's bothering you ?

    Welp, right as I was enjoying Life, looks like I'm sick, the whole family is! It's a bad one, completely warm, my joints hurt, phlegm up the wazoo. I can barely focus and move, but I must... And Semester Just started! I HAVE AN ALGEBRA CLASS! Well, that's life I suppose, I could be getting...
  13. kohelemon

    JoJo's Bizarre Adventure Part 9 - The JOJOLands - Vol. 5 Ch. 18 - Lulu-chan and Bobby Jean Part 1

    Bobby Jean is hilarious! I wonder how are team is getting out of this one? We know everyone may be defeated, Dragona will be in trouble, and Jodio will show up and pull out some out of nowhere stunt, but what? Hit the Bullets with November Rain?
  14. kohelemon

    Tell us, what's bothering you ?

    Ahh, once more things are looking good. And I've spent this week crazy writing. I've completed 5 big chapters this week, 6 if you count the one I reworked at the start to end a little less suddenly. While this Chunk of the Story feels definitely shorter, I am now upon the Finale of it. Yet...
  15. kohelemon

    Yuuenchi – Baki Gaiden Manga - Vol. 4 Ch. 15 - Master Kunimatsu, the Howling Demon

    YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! Been a while, which actually made this a nice surprise! I was looking for something to read!
  16. kohelemon

    Whats the coolest main character power youve see?

    Hokuto Shinken, Kenshiro can blow people up, when is that not cool?
  17. kohelemon

    Shounen mangas that the MC is a girl.

    Anyone mention Jojo Stone Ocean? Once I saw the trailer, saw Jolyne, saw Ermes I had to read it, and after getting through all the bizarre adventures, I found a perfect ending in Stone Ocean.
  18. kohelemon

    Grappler Baki - Vol. 4 Ch. 30

    I know most of the time Itagaki makes these cameo-like-characters fail in many ways, But I still love them. Seeing lookalikes and direct resemblances makes the story, feel real in a way.
  19. kohelemon

    Ikusa no Ko

    :O New Art added! Oh please, give us chapters! Please!
  20. kohelemon

    Baki Rahen - Vol. 3 Ch. 27 - Cretacean

    Alright, we're getting right to it! No ifs, ands or bu--- Oh darn it, Another Break! NYARGH!
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