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No one is born a bandit, but they all choose to murder and pillage honest folk. The idea that you should treat them with any kind of sympathy is comparable to letting a pack of wolves or a grizzly bear go. You can't afford them any kindness.

Don't worry, Honey. I'm sure you'll get another chance to shine soon.

Chapter 2 and he's already being unfaithful.

He didn't even verify anything.

What are the chances he hacks up Barem now?

He'll look so majestic all grown up.

Nothing goes to waste. Yajin uses every part of the fox.

"Princess of the Bottom of the Bottle", what is that nickname?

Page 7 That is a bugbear.

Free food? It's Hana's time to shine.

Friendly diplomatic relations? Let's burn down their home and kidnap them! They'll definitely love us after that!

You would think the goth loli would get more backstory, but no, this was the depth of her character.

Much better, still some pronoun confusion. Why would you translate the nickname to "Ruu" if you know it's short for "Lucifer" Wouldn't the obvious choice be "Lu" then?

Blackmailing a near-immortal famous war-hero probably wasn't a good idea even without Aria being involved.

I'll miss Kitty-horns.

Murata just wanted us to remember who the main character is.

That was the only bad page that took me out of the story. The rest reads naturally. Well, except the missed panels of course. You improved a lot as you progressed through the chapter. Regarding the commentary page, "finally" was in reference to Juliana assuming Michelle was Claude's "bed...

You're making a convoluted "what if" to justify your stance. What we do know is the elves are xenophobic, so chances are nothing good would come from lingering around their forest for decades on the hope he'd live long enough to see her again. Why are you so insistent this guy made the wrong choice?

He has literally nothing to gain. You said he should suffer for the "greater good."

Everyone's glazing for basic typesetting and talking about getting a redrawer when the most important part is subpar. I'm going to nitpick one page. I'll try to be constructive. Page 2 Panel 1 Who is speaking? It's Claude isn't it? Why is it in first person tense? I'm guessing it was ambiguous...