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@HDMI1 I didn't see anything about them being humans in cat forms. Just supernatural cats destined to protect this particular family

Jealousy eh. Also girl, pulling those kind of stunts is a good way to make the quite sharp love interest notice yer game. Don't go for such a thing.

Okay, this chapter was super chaotic and super confusing and super condensed.

@Tatherwood Fair's fair. I have been writing for 15 years as a hobby/passion as well. Not language teacher though so I likely lack that irritating itch that comes from seeing improper usage of words... well, most of the time. I did do translations of novels over to my native language for a time...

@Malte I mean, I don't disagree? It is just that instinct wise, humans will react worse if it is the opposite gender as in those cases it is often sexual reasons behind the stalking. And those reasons are the kind that have the implications of potentially more dangerous results. And yes yes...

@Tatherwood Well, the word "simp" has also shifted in tone from being insulty to being said lightheartedly, the shift started shortly after the vtuber craze began. Pretty sure there is a decent overlap between folk that read manga and those that consume that kind of entertainment. And atl in...

@Tatherwood Words and meaning change with time. Just look at what Yeet has become.

@Glomoro It is a bad habit if it is detrimental to your life and work. Though tbf she is skirting and stretching the line way much, her blood circulation must be awful.

His stalking was super creepy though. I can understand it is because he has no idea about social norms, but someone should cramp it into his head that him stalking someone for 2 weeks is super no no. Especially someone of the opposite sex

Sounds like she has something similar to narcolepsy

Poor her. She has been trampled down so much that she can't think of hoping for anything. She just wants to live every moment as if it was her last. She may not know it, but this is not a good thing. Not the living every moment to the fullest, the "no hopes for the future or wishes for...

@Thing482 Completely agree. At the minimum she should be jailed, and if she has use, work for life to make up for her actions. But there is a reason why traitors to a country is usually death or life imprisonment.

The structure of most of the text was good. There were grammatical errors here and there, but that can be easily fixed by getting someone to go over the text for you. Other than that. Thanks for putting in work. I know number of folk down here are being overly rash and critical, but I made...

@WeepingFlower And his reasoning to bring her in for judge and jury, brought to "justice" for being slightly less thrifty than her scrooge of a husband? We did see him call for execution. And no one with their right mind would say "Yes, this clearly extremely grieving and traumatised woman is...

Indeed. You just can't fully despise him.

I hope someone was watching and slaughters all of these bastards If not, then this was almost droppable offense in stupidity of a chapter. Jesus. I have never seen, even for guys that are pacifists in these kind of setting, let fucking child sex traffickers just go free... the minimum would be...

It feels very weird to see the younger version of the female protagonist and then a lovemaking scene with said protagonist in the same chapter.... while her face has hardly changed at all.

@ohkimch He is free to redeem himself... in prison that is. Think about it. Exchange his face&body with a fat, ugly bastard and do tell me if you want to forgive him. :P

Heh. So there are people that want to plunge entire continent into death and destruction...

@empressnyannyanau If so, for the third time. The "Romance" tag is even more alarming if her mother slept with all 4 and she is fated (I hope not) to date one of them once she gets older...