“I decided to stop deceiving people for a living” so I decided to deceive them for fun and pretend to be a high school student and flirt with kids.???? This concept is so dumb it should’ve been binned before the storyboarding stage.
This is a weirdly paced story, with much of the justification happening in late flashbacks. Not really the best way to structure character development.
The concept is interesting but the execution is such a letdown. I’d love to read the perspective of a homeless guy. This story drops almost all of that immediately to become the usual, trite boy adventure stuff.