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Uhh... I'm okay with this misunderstanding. But MC is dense as hell though no wonder she was a failed writer I guess?

Did it seriously take anyone more than 3 seconds to figure out that they should just freeze the water?.... 🙄

If you're to fragile to read those first 7 Pages then you need to get off the Internet...

... This may be a bit interesting.

People who talk to much... ugh.

@Mel_hart_ You are a champ thanks for the explanation.

Someone needs to explain the difference between Sympathy and Empathy to this dude...

Good god he is stupid...

Ahh... I'm caught up... damn...

That was actually a very well written first chapter.

Are we just going to gloss over the KNIFE he brought to School?!?

@MrMcNasty Lol that's fair.

There is SO much wrong in this first chapter and most of it could be avoided if the Author just kept the US Military out of it. If you're gonna take THAT much liberty just make it all fiction Jesus.

That was ridiculously stupid and out of character for her -_-

She a dumb bimbo if she goes sneaking off somewhere with a Prince who has confessed to her... no she isnt that airheaded right?

@Winterflower18 to be honest I'm wondering the same thing I think the punishment for impersonating aristocracy is probably death and there is no way she gets away with this so....

Lol he is about to rake them over the coals

Its a very shameful act to take credit for someone elses work those type of people are not good leaders...

What a friggin virgin...

Rude to grab people... Someone get this kid a book on manners and decorum.