Dude is lucky, girl was with him just because he had a bright future and is willing to leave over something like this- definitely not someone who will stick with you through sickness and health.
He probably doesn't feel lucky though.
If the translation is accurate, the word usage made everything very hard to understand. Thank you for the chapter, but I feel like I've missed half of the conflict in this chapter. It's possible the chapter is just kind of inscrutable though, I guess.
Other sites' translations don't have anything to do with mangadex by their own choice, it doesn't really mean anything to compare them. More confused why you would use an aggregator site at all if you're wanting to go to individual sites anyway.
I truly appreciate this being picked up. The flow of language is very stiff though, but it's still understandable in most cases. Some parts could be rephrased to read better though.