There's only four characters of any significance in this manga, the relatinship chart is a tetrahedron which doesn't need more than three dimensionse, and can be easily projected onto a 2D plane with no intersections
Thanks for picking this up
If I may, the letter spacing and line spacing is sometimes too squished.
Also regarding the "how to erase text", in this particular speech bubble, I would use GIMP's clone tool or Photoshop's clone stamp tool or their analogs in your graphics software of choice. Though...
This reads like a werstern Young Adult fantasy novel, but in manga form.
I am not a Young Adult, well not anymore, and I am not sure if I could comprehend this manga if I still was
Damn
The funniest thing about identical twins is not being bothered with knowing which one is which
I had this kind of expeirence when I was minorly acquianted with a pair of twins back in my college days. I've encountered one of them a year after our graduation, and we had a nice but...
Remember how grotesque that scene in chapter 64 was? Now I'll make it even more grotesque for you: the guy from that chapter is nodding with understanding as Sumire mentions her hemorrhoid
Yea this exact analogy does not work at all. A random period of 23 minutes of your live can not be considered a story, even if one were the most interesting person in the world, it would still not be a story by definition. And on the other hand, I reckon there'd be 23 minutes worth of events to...