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Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p6 won't find -> wouldn't find p12 continue this path -> continue on this path p14 We're the same then. -> We're the same, then. p16 such a vague reasoning -> such vague reasoning p18 Gina joined the party -> Gina joined the party.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p8 imp-ssible -> impos-sible p12 preserve world's order -> preserve the world's order p14 And it even heals -> [? Does it repair the barrier, or heal her wounds, or what?] p17 those equipment -> that equipment p17 could it be headmaster...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p3 Are you the one who came to pick me up? -> Are you here to pick me up? p3 Less mouth to feed -> One less mouth to feed p3 fate too -> fate, too p8 from the past loop -> from a past loop p14 burn this place -> burn this place down //...

Does it? If she's frozen in time, shouldn't she be entirely immune to any outside influence?

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p1 with a demon race -> with a demon // with one of the demon race p2 in god too -> in god, too p6 A while ago [...] has emerged -> A while ago [...] emerged p6 A prodigy who appears once in a century -> A once-in-a-century prodigy...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p3 x2 & p7 x2 & Oro -> Auro p4 what's wrong buddy -> what's wrong, buddy p8 yet I still accidentally step -> yet I still accidentally stepped p11 disappoint you Lauro -> disappoint you, Lauro p17 was a good teamwork -> was good teamwork...

If you appreciate the feedback, I'm happy to provide it <3. You missed this one: p17 Thing's are -> Things are > p32 yes, that's what Eta wanted to say and yes, that is a typo (it's "heart's content" btw). -> [This is purely me quibbling, but I think it's "my heart's content" vs. "our hearts'...

Hey there, I'm glad you appreciate the feedback. But please don't feel the need to respond to my suggestions, I'm trying to help, not make extra work for you^^. That said, let me justify a few of my suggestions: p10 The problem is in "They're all lined up for them", as in, there are two...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p3 you were...?! -> you did...?! p14 instead of arresting... -> instead of arresting 'em... // instead of arresting us... p15 I did escape after all -> I did escape, after all p15 I am standing here, in front -> I am standing here...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p5 the world has no choice -> the world will have no choice p8 obnoxious as of late. -> obnoxious as of late? p10 They're all lined up for them -> People are all lined up for them // There's even a line for them p10 in the...

Karasuma wants to be a cool hero, but for some reason can't. (Maybe the green blood on Eta's face was Karasuma's, and it's the reason why Karasuma can't be a "cool" hero?) I figure he might have specifically killed this villain because he would've revealed Eta's identity otherwise. Well, it's...

The English title of this series is "Spica of Sin and Punishment". For Spica, punishing unsolved crimes is the entire point. She doesn't consider herself to be a saint, either, and even gave the ill police detective the chance to report her. That said, regarding her own vigilantism, she...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @NotsoFps p12 Catching murderers who escaped... justice and punishing them -> Catching murderers who escaped justice... and punishing them

Where might the author have gotten the idea for this specific method of bodyswapping? Maybe from Hina's introduction in Hinamatsuri c1p12?

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p1 third grader -> third-grader p3 and now being hunted -> and now you're being hunted p3 How can you kill people so easily. -> How can you kill people so easily? p3 make due -> make do p6 Well it'll be -> Well, it'll be p18 So are...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p5 They're saying it's a woman who went crazy and not J this time. -> They're saying this time it's a woman who went crazy and not J. p5 Still not get it? -> Still don't get it? p12 Course you're -> Of course you're p12 not that...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p2 "Where are They" x2 -> "Where are they"? x2 p2 had mixed reception -> had a mixed reception // received a mixed reception p2 There have to be -> There must be

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p5 as a kid so -> as a kid, so p5 do for fun. -> do for fun? p8 I won't give up living things up -> I won't give up livening things up p8 by killing anyways -> by killing, anyways p10 bodies soon. -> bodies soon? p13 if I did she ->...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p1 & title & p17: third grader -> third-grader p17 Well even though -> Well, even though

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p13 my body you know -> my body, you know p14 if the wound's closed I probably -> if the wound's closed, I probably p17 first with switching bodies then -> first with switching bodies, then p17 like this then -> like this, then p19...