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This is cute, I wish it became serialized.

Nanomachines, son.

Are there some missing pages? The MC just suddenly spouts about having seeing "something like a kidnapping" but that's never show.

I'm pretty sure she killed them so that they wouldn't talk and expose who sent them (her side of the church) disguising it as a twisted sense of justice.

Are we sure the one in control wasn't an actual devil? She was pulling some Exorcist's moves there.

Seems like a decent start, but I go the feeling her talking with the original villainess and god went for a bit too long. I think the point of doing a story as an otome isekai (and other trope-filled subgenres) is that we all know what to expect, so explanations can be handwaved and summarized...

I'm sure that the new girl didn't even wanted to go back with her former boyfriend, she just wanted to have a reason to talk with Ichinose, acting hearbroken so that he felt pity for her. My man is both too dense and too tired of that kind of act to fall for that. He needs to start carrying...

At this point in the story, Hanabi at least is showing hints of character growth and regret, so there is hope for a somewhat stable relationship forward. However, you just said we had to date either, not how long or under what circumstances. I'm tempted to go vigilante and date the new girl but...

Even ignoring all of modern technology, an offspring produced by siblings doesn't really have THAT much more risk than the average population. The problem comes when incest continues to be practiced over several generations. The second problem is that, IRL, the ones more likely to commit incest...

I think at one point the prince realized that he had been lied by the person he loved, that he had condemned an innocent who was already being abused, and that he put his nation at risk for doing so. He could have skipped halfway or double down, but decided to do what was best for his country...

Yeah. Perhaps it is a ritual that it is only known in the other country, but that presents another series of plot holes on its own. Another problem I have with it is that it is a bit slow and not as dramatic as it could be. I think I would have preferred if the 5 questions were all made in...

The only explanation/headcanon I can come up with is that the step sister was her half sister, the father was cheating with the widow before his wife died. As it is usual with cheaters, he might have suspected his wife was cheating him too, and that the villainess was not his daughter. If the...

I understand where you are coming from though, it is a bit gimmicky and gets old fast rather quickly. It might be a bit tolerable if she was younger.

I see some potential in the story, most of it being based on the design of the older sister, but I think it is better if this author leaves it as a oneshot.

She is odd, but aside from calling the Elf "wife" and saying a few thing in a way kids wouldn't say it (which is rather common for fictional works displaying children), I don't see it as a big deal. I was actually expecting her to get jealous of the guy or try to do something inappropriate to...

It is a rather basic plot, though I enjoyed the LI being so pure and supportive. The villainess didn't really do anything though. It was a fresh air to see that the prince didn't fall for the heroine's schemes. The young girl at the start didn't really apport much to the plot, though her faces...

Ok, let's put things on perspective, Snake girl got disillusioned with people very early on, the friends she trusted were mean and just followed whoever was "stronger", her parents left her alone, and the idol she admired wasn't as pure as she thought. This left her with a very "only the strong...

It is cute, but I think it could have been better with a few edits. I'm thinking maybe making the villainess be aware that the heroine put a curse on her, similarly to how the typical slave mark works in other isekais. The heroine would have ordered her to be hostile towards her and feel...

I would like to see a story like this expanded, like, an otaku boy and a girl met up in the first day at their new school, they get along due to their hobbies, but at first it seems purely platonic, but they start hanging up more, they have events like this maid cafe, they go on "dates"...

I don't think the reveal is going to be so soon, the author is probably going to milk that out a little more. The king is probably strong enough to contain the dragon lady without transforming, or he has some soldiers on the ready to arrest her.