id NEVER play guitar with gloves on lmfao, the raw feel from fingers is important. besides, calluses are kinda cool, i dont see why youd want to avoid it. a sign of the work you've put in
goddamn that was cool. also, nice drawing on the credits page! maybe use higher contrast on the shading though, the white of the TL page drowns out all the work you did to shade it and all that.
I'm indonesian, I can translate the "Strange boy" line properly.
In english, I'd imagine it's something like "The kingdom is already in the hands of a strange slave."