I don’t like the premise. Why did she marry him if she wasn’t comfortable dropping her front around him? Disregarding this major contradiction, it’s not bad.
I feel like the inspiration behind the whole story was the single panel where he wants to say something but gets cut off.
That was definitely the highlight of the oneshot.
“Or something” tagged onto the end of a complete clause is very popular among a small subset of my acquaintances, and those who use it do it somewhat frequently.
Wow, this is awful. None of the characters are written like people and all the events are crude means to push a shallow narrative regarding the two main characters.