https://www.hyphenation24.com/ (You might want to suggest this to your typesetter.) Also, please ask them to center the text. If the text is too large, reducing the size slightly will make it look much better.
@alreadyexisttaena You made the same mistake again.
Page 20: We see both Grandma and grandpa so it's plural which means it's supposed to be Grandpa and I were already in this cell. (was is for singular use not plural)
@alreadyexisttaena You missed some text bubble
page 26
It can be translated to hmm (as someone waking up)
Page 27
It can be translated to Okay! or Got it! (As in okay, got it!)
Page 30
It can be translated to Hmm? (as in hmm? what was that?)
and the bottom text basically shows her being jealous...