Ok slightly better than before, very good. There's more room for improvement on the style, so do take yer time making it look more "prettier" to read 👍
Ok wtf 2nd sniper this time?? @MyleneScans mf.. just stay TLing yer MobuSeka with yer bad TS.
Also, Yer pfp is not even Mylene-sama, disgraceful heretic!