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I get that the author really, really wants the MC to seem very smart. Instead, he just comes across as reckless and lucky.

Dennis needs to put out some traps in the [sage] room, maybe some sticky strips, or spray some poison to keep the little pests out.

At this point I'm half expecting a gigantic Rei Ayanami face to appear on the horizon.

And even worse, it was his wanking arm.

Man, the mangaka really has a fetish for light-haired little girls getting SA'd and killed... A while back I asked just what the heck Krusha even was. Now here's the author just kind of shrugging and going, "Uhnnuh? Nobody really knows." I think those other clones are just a side-effect. It's...

That's a much tougher dilemma for those remaining kids than it might seem to us reading it. The whole time since they got trucked they've only been hearing how the demons have been literally demonised by the empire. Now they're being love-bombed, and their mood is so cruddy that even a decent...

I am amused by how the same spud who even now is still so selfish that he makes Rei seem like Santa Claus continues to call everyone else in the world "selfish" for not catering to his every whim.

On Page 5 when that old elf cleric said, "I believe I understand those two quite well," I thought for a moment that he meant Minachi and Akane, since they were in the adjacent panel. That is, he was also declaring his intention to formally join the harem. "Or else, she might be playing around...

@K-Lye The part of my brain that tries to rationalise plot-holes, no matter how bad, wants to say that when the MC [absorbed] her power that interrupted, however briefly, the spell that had been keeping her alive for these past four centuries. But the bitter old man part of my brain wants to...

Akane: "Wait! There's something I want to ask." Are hotdogs sandwiches? What's the average airspeed of an unladen swallow? What do you want to do with your life? (I wanna rock!) Does this dress make me look fat?

Ordina, soon to be pining for the fjords: "As one of the heroes, I must kill you!" Suddenly very mammalian princess: "We've already got hero at home."

"I'm crushing your head"

Senseless goth-on-goth violence

🎶 Na na na na na na na Na na na na na na Dead Jiggy wit it

Wait, we can't have the MC just jump right into berserk mode like that. We need at least one chapter that's purely internal thoughts, and then another two that are flashbacks. Then maybe one showing a montage, if the artist can stick a bunch of fanservice into it. There's a procedure to these...

"Next time, or Ore dake Ball Z..."

@Serverclosed She does have a certain flair; I gotta give her that.

Skyfarm & Ryusei Takahata: "How can we follow up the chapter with the naked little girl who was SA'd and tortured to death? Oh, I know, we'll start off with even more rape and death, then immediately transition into a scene where one naked teenaged girl gets molested by another naked girl who...

I hate hate HATE the 'girlfriends in refrigerators' trope. The victim being a child just makes it even worse. Yes, it elicits a visceral response from me, but never the one the author intended. Yes, it's horrifying, but rather than be mad at the fictional perpetrator in the story, I am instead...

Page 17, last panel: "We're not even supposed to be here right now." Cock-smoking clerks