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I totally accept that the first time you taste something both new and good, and especially any new sauce at all, the "taste sensation" effect is very strong. So people are absolutely gonna knock doors down for that, even if she isnt really making the right thing. I get all that. But... why is...

I think ahe should take on the other-kingdom-alchemist-guy as at least a helper, or something; he has great potential, and she has an unbroken line of knowledge that is invaluable. Of course there are international relations to be considered, but it would be a net benefit. Also, can Lyle now...

Well. I guess... Slow life, get! Right? Really, though; this shit fire with that slow burn.

I like her. She's good people.

Hey, thanks for your work on this series! I just read all 8 chapters, and I think you did a decent job, and that the story is interesting, so... 10/10 for me! Keep up the good work! And remember: If you're gonna burn out, do so brightly!

What a completely average Karen. Such fun, remembering basically every day of high school.

Okay, that would make sense, but I don't like it. 😅 I was wondering if this was maybe a composite timeline, or if the same thing that caused Rachael-sama to rewind time is also at work after the second rewind happened, but... :thonk: Thing is, I remember the scene of them talking politely on...

I've been trying to figure out if Rachael/FL is on her second time through or not, but she seems to have all of her magic; I can't imagine why this FL/Rachael would start shit with the MC, and it had me wondering what composite timeline we might be reading. I rather like Rachael, and the whole...

I see what he's going for, and it almost seems like he's not planned it at all. Just making his position clear; letting a girl know, as it were... Anyway; definitely don't do dudes with baggage. I mean, unless that baggage is money.[/SPOILER] So, I suppose I appreciate what he's trying to do...

Plot progression is a beautiful thing. Love to see this finished, since I hear it's complete at Chapter 51...?

MC: I'm sure I haven't changed too much, right...? Saintess has become a lover of gay fiction.

Ha! MC outmaneuvers shittyprince ML! Suck it, shitty prince!

Uh huh. Chess, a remarkably simple game, renowned for its relative simplicity, is... checks notes... "Too Complicated." Was the comparison given to, say... chewing gum? Because 6-year-olds can learn chess pretty easily, and any 12-year-old will pick it up in less than an afternoon. And then...

Ah. Yes. "Entertainment." I have low expectations; to invent chess, one must first have some concepts that require thoughts wayyyyyyy the fuck beyond the game itself. I mean, games that only involve diagonal movements, or perpendicular movements; games with one type of piece, games with...

Yes, I have also been wondering since the very first chapter if she was assuming "the game" would somehow "do everything" if she just ignored it and went about her business. If her outlook is that this is not a "real" world, with "real" people in it, then why should she care what happens to...

I am fine with never marrying the prince, cos then she'd have to be Queen, and fuck that for a game of soldiers...! But... Really... I do appreciate that he's making the effort to be a good friend; he is plainly considering courting her, but he is just making sure to not pressure her, he's...

This is really hard to read; it's honestly not very good. The premise is great, I kinda low key love the art, but the MC is just so unbelievably weird; like, think about it: A girl grows up with a boy for most of her life, he constantly is in her life, he makes it plain he loves her... and she's...

There is no girl who is this dense. X chromosomes prevent this behavior. So, No.

I couldn't even make it through the entire chapter because none of it made any fucking sense. It's like they're all complete strangers, acting out scenes, and speaking lines, but for no evident reason; none of the reactions make sense, and some that should be there are just... missing, and...

She is only writing down the shit that pissed people off about the GameFL, and not writing down what she DID. The girl summoned a kappa, and so did you; why not write that down? She was saved by the prince; maybe that, too? She befriended Kai; how about that? She is only writing down a small...