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Nah, that probably only hides the more severe mistakes. I suspect in some parts the meaning got totally missed. If it was polished the turd inside would not be so obvious.

For me it's Belell

The current group didn't drop it AFAIK, they are just late. No need to jump in, really. Particularly if it isn't proper jpn to english TL.

Whoa, it really happened. It was obvious but I really thought Sieg ****ing in Lynn is something that won't come to pass, hahaha. Kinda abrupt, perhaps that deserved more exploitation.

What's with all those seethe replies, lol? You guys should read Rosen Garten Saga to see how to do this with more style.

Too much of that degrading misogynous porn shit-flavor this time, wasted opportunity for something funnier.

He just said futanari is okay to get laid, shuddering inside. Also, female Imp.... :headpat:

It's clearly inspired by Roadside Picnic (known as Stalker after the movie adaptation, not sure how much the games are even related).

If there was a Nobel prize for achievements in smut...

Confirmed bush at page 11, bottom right panel, between nun-chan's fingers. Oh, so that's what she meant. Eh.

This better be for the noble end goal of getting the three species to stop their war in their world.

Her hair looked dark after that, I wonder if that was Sieg talking to her.

I like how elf yuri frolicking cleanses environment and saves it from pollution as a byproduct. In the other elf story, elf knocking up her Romeo&Juliet-style childhood friend casually solves the conflict between the two elf nations, with their babies playing together at the end. :wooow: Bravo!

An ELF in HEAVY ARMOR. And she has a cool sword! Damn, to think the most precious gem in the world has been hiding in this silly webcomic...

Dude, they are children. Half of children are jerks if not outright bully b***ards.

She could get the whole unit disbanded before that, instead, making all the girls unemployed. She can do it, I believe.

I prefer the option that her judgement was impaired by that point. Because even if all that pressure and lack of time was so serious, looking through the window or listening at the door takes seconds. Absolutely unlikely that those few seconds will make you exceed the deadline at the end, so no...

Exactly. Also, she clearly sneaked up on the first two guys in deliberated way which involves observation and preparation phase, so her getting surprised at the gang inside just isn't very believable. I'm pretty sure that soccer team of thugs wouldn't keep silent for a minute, she would hear...

Even if there was just one left, it is still a good idea to try to first investigate and not go in blind. I'm not insinuating she's dumb, more like I fear that's what certain sorts of readers will say. I would also expect the mistake to have been due to the fever, as noted above? The writing...