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Based on the outline of her clothed, she should be MUCH bustier than she is shown topless. Topless she is a B cup, small C cup at most; shown clothed she is about F cup.

In chapter 1 in the posted scans, quoted material is enclosed in left quotes . It should instead be enclosed in `left and right quotes´ or should be enclosed in 'mid quotes' . Using left quotes is usually code for presenting the material without quotation marks in monoface type.

I am looking forward to seeing more of this.

It isn't clear what the final order is???

The Psy Kangaroo translations are all marked as "No Volume", but they should be woven in with the Volume 1, Volume 2, etc. structure

The numbering of the most recent episodes is messed up. After 33 there is a jump to 29 in the numbering, but in fact the second set of 29 onward continues after the 33, and so should be numbered 34, 35, and so on.

Should this perhaps have a "Boys Love" tag?

What is currently marked as chapter 1, specifically says in it that it is the second installment of a one-shot. That suggests that it ought to be chapter 2 instead of chapter 1.

This is sort of sweet, and conveys well the awkwardness of first love. I like that she is sort of gangly, and only partly conventionally beautiful, indicating that sometimes pure beauty is not what it takes, and instead what it takes is just finding someone who is attractive to you

Chapter 3, page 7, she extends her right hand. But in the next panel, she and he are each shaking their left hands.

It ends so suddenly... feels very unresolved.

This is a surprisingly sweet series.

It is confusing. It is marked as a oneshot, and at the very beginning it says it is a one-shot. But the end says to stay tuned for an update, and the margins say that the last update is chapter 4. Something that has multiple chapters is not a oneshot.

Having the series die in the middle of the story feels disappointing. Not that it was a great series, but still disappointing.

Early in Chapter 7, BRS Manhua Scans, the word "FORZEN" should be "FROZEN". The word "COTRACT" should be "CONTRACT"

The ending feels a bit rushed, as-if they got notice that serialization was about to be dropped and so they tacked on some final chapters.

The N3k0 scans version of Chapter 7.1 is a duplicate of Chapter 7. The "No group" version of Chapter 7.1 is correct.

Could definitely have used at least one more scene.

This one looks like it will be interesting.

Now I want to know whether she takes the strawberry ice cream or the vanilla ;-) (There is a vague hint on the container drawing that she possibly takes the strawberry.)