Please replace the colored image with the original. If it was actually colored by a person then put it at the end. If it's AI colored then leave it out.
Should page 19 say "He can't cure you" instead?
Also I don't understand the explanation on page 13. Why would the vaccine have three people mixed in? How does that work? Doesn't make sense.
This made me think that I kinda like that there hasn't been a reason given as to why she's obsessed with him and no one in-universe has cared enough to ask. It fits the goofy tone of this manga.
Any excuse will do to get more women to have sex with Kuuma, won't it?
The twins kept that crazy look on their faces for most of it, which is impressive.
It's definitely off. Either MTL with little editing, non-native English speaker, or both. If it's the second, I hope this is a good way to learn English and they improve over time.
I think even Oda forgot that this was supposed to be about Loki and Harald. As glad as I am to finally know the full story of what happened at God Valley, this was a weird time to go into all the details.
In a manga where people can teleport other people to them, shoot laser beams out of their fingers, or control the wind, I don't think someone producing lotion from their skin is all that far-fetched.