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Him thinking theft is the lowest humans could stoop is pretty cute, I hope he stays insulated and pure

I love Hakari's self-deception here Pretending Karane's even a fraction as horny as she is, and thus she's completely pure ofc.

I love their competing alibis. In their rush to explain away the situation they made it obvious they were hiding something lol

Absolutely adorable It's pretty incredible how much emotional weight simple skin-to-skin contact can carry, there's a lot of intimacy in this relatively simple interraction

Zero hesitation from Airu lmao, good on her. Also love the living Gundam comment, that's a funny way to describe a person

It's a split second (1 panel) but I appreciate the payoff of his sister being twisted around in her bed after it was mentioned as an issue for Miku sharing the bed last chapter.

So assumedly, seeing the original, you used quotes to emphasize the part that was originally highlighted, right? That initially threw me for a loop thinking she was calling into doubt FMC's sisterhood. Makes more sense in context now though

Nice reversal on MCs part - very cute chapter

Interesting, it seems to be a complete redraw panel-to-panel. I expected page 2 to just have the head changed and the body+plush the same, but it seems like it's all new line art (perhaps with the exception of the box/shelf) and rendering. I wonder why they decided to go to the effort...? I'm...

Small correction/suggestion for page 3. Panel 1, speech box 2 reads: "The clothes that I have earlier got wet so I changed into this one." Which I believe is strangely worded. My explanations and suggested changes follow: For one, clothes are plural so it should end with "-into these ones."...

Sounds like the truthful words of someone who's well held-together and not at all disappointed.

Makes sense that inspiration came when they finally got some time to settle down. Pushing yourself continuously can really dampen the creative spirit - not to mention that you often need a 'new set of eyes' on something, either by bringing in someone else or taking a break and looking back on...

Here you go no idea what significance it has, if any, though

... And now we have Biz Zwei. They really predicted the future with this one

I had to do a double-read (literary double-take) on page 8 to make sure Yuuki had a thought bubble instead of a speech bubble. That was a fun reveal of her reading him like a book

Making the Fubuki glasses-rant but for twins? Good on you!

Just have them periodically Voltron together, et voilà

Do it for Mousse

So she's a phony, lol. At least she's honest about it Edit: definitely nothing fake about her knowledge of plants though

For Suu, you just need to number out her steps (and maybe list the line numbers of the song?) She'll be enthusiastically thinking "1!" "2!" "3!" The whole performace