I hope that last page is just mostly a edgy joke, the TL was passable and the type setting was bearable. But you should give yourself credit, as your the only one TL this, and for that you have my thanks.
Depends on the ship assignments, and if he is in the air wing of IJN, if he fly then chances are he's gone by the great Mariana turkey shoot if he's assigned to a ship, well not much luck either...
Where the couple lives again, cus most major metro was burnt to the ground...
Man those gates are larger than the one in The Expanse like much larger, and much much more heavily defended, kinda make sense tbh as it probably the corner stone of the empire, the literal jugular vein of the empire.
Actually no. This adaptation is really close to the novel, some of it are even word for word. So no it not rice
P.S where would a peasant get rice anyway, like getting outside town is allready considered impressive thing, importing from a distant country is reversed for royalty and high ranked...