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Indeed. I wondered about the rear part - usually a coal/wood container - why is that even needed? At least until they put a magic air cannon in it. Also the boiler part seems redundant. Both would reduce weight. I figured a subway or tram like-design would be better when its powered by magic...

Their website redirects to something else - a gambling site? A shop?

They must have changed it, because a MTL of text partly says:

Tiny mistakes: Page 1, panel 5: "..dropped here on.." Page 8, panel 3: "Moreover,in.." -> "Moreover, in.." (missing space)

Rare to see a manga dissing rice, but a welcome thing. Commonly its "ohh", "ahh" and its-a-miracle thing.

Small typo on page 6: Fearis's -> Fairis'

This is still the wrong chapter, 346 to be exact. A substantial jump in story. I had to read Flame scans for a while, and they use different names/terms, so that was a bit confusing.

Too bad we did not learn what abilities were learned from those Sealed gem's. It seemed important. TL feedback. Page 15, panel 1, bubble 2: "I had wanted around round against you ..". Should that have been "another" ? Page 16, panel 3: "So, I go around the city to items to be stocked .."...

Page 16+17: "hair are" -> "hair is" Page 17: Space missed "touchedme" -> "touched me". "multiple time" -> "multiple times" Page 21: "heard you" -> "heard me" Nobody expects a/1 chapter per day! So relax, and take it easy. Even 1 per week is a luxury for all/most manga. Thanks for all your work...

Page 7, panel 5: While it does work, "I'll have the chef" sounds weird to me in this context, I think "I have the chef" is better. Currently it means the she will ask/tell the chef [in the future], but it seems the intent is she [currently] already asks/tells the chef because she is bad at...

Page 8: "it's was" -> "it was"

Page 7, panel 3, bubble 3: "he using is" -> "he is using the" Page 12, bubble 1: "want to" -> "wants to"

Page 8: "thats sensation" -> "that sensation" Page 10: "allright" -> "alright"

Page 7 looks not fixed for me.

Both page 22 this chapter and page 3 of next chapter. "My breast" is singular, while "please massage them" is plural - to me, it does not mix. Maybe use: "My breasts" "massage them", or "My chest" "massage it", or "My breast" "massage it".

Typo on page 20, panel 1: Durint this -> During this

I would have liked a note what/who "The sejm" is. Like what chapter it was explained in.

Thanks for yet another chapter. @KingoRodriguo Change suggestions: Page 11, panel 4/last: It's, by far -> She is by far Page 12, panel 2, bubble 3: I get the intent with "solitary wolf type" since wolves are social animals, but it reads weird to me at least - I think "is a "lone" wolf" or "is...

@KingoRodriguo Change suggestions: Page 8, panel 3: Typo. sorr. -> sorry Page 8, panel 4: Typo. kouyou kun -> kouyou-kun Page 10, panel 1: Typo. next excercice -> next excersice Page 10, panel 3: these wheelbarrows excercice are -> this wheelbarrows excersice is Page 17, panel 2: she've -> she...

@KingoRodriguo Wording I would change: Page 5, panel 1, bubble 1: Today, it begins Page 11, panel 1: Well, we'll be in your care Page 12, panel 2: Typo. donw -> down Page 13, panel 6/last: go with the next -> go to the next