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Thanks for the chapter! Typo & edit suggestions: @roppatsu p16 quite a a rascal -> quite a rascal (In p17-19, Mirai is talking about a future vision, so lines like "I told it this" seem like they're in the wrong tense and should maybe be more like "I'll tell it this". Same with "Why did you...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p3 Please be of no concern -> Please don't be concerned p5 that, bomber -> that bomber p7 Don't Cross at a Red Light -> ["Green Light, Red Light" is actually p9 follow after her -> chase her p15 at time like these -> at times like...

You'd think Sumire got scammed, but this supposedly indestructible phone might well get destroyed every time she transforms. In which case that overly generous warranty would be an absolute bargain despite the insane sticker price. How many phones does Sumire need to go through before it's the...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @_Yanagi_ p23 top secret information [...] were stolen -> top secret information [...] was stolen -> p24 original's story -> original story

Thanks for the chapter! Typo & edit suggestions: @lin_tvdchick p32 settled things up -> settled things p34 who died as a villainess -> who had died as a villainess p34 who died as a villainess, and even though -> who died as a villainess. And even though [<-> run-on sentence] p35 share...

I appreciate the detailed reply, and I'm perfectly content with your explanation for why these lines shouldn't be changed. That said, please don't feel the need to reply in such depth to my feedback comments. I make a ton of them on scanlated manga chapters I read, in hopes of helping the...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec p3 Here's an advice. -> Here's my advice. p4 kills anything be it -> kills anyone, be it p4 that kills so swift and clean -> that kills so swiftly and cleanly // whose kills are so swift and clean p6 almost familiar, someone -> almost...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @roppatsu p6 dead men talk no tales -> dead men tell no tales p15 -Lity. -> -lity.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p10 the news are on -> the news is on p11 I got no -> I've got no p12 kinda feel off -> feel kinda off p12 just as I expected from -> just as expected from p15 underestimate them and be sure -> underestimate them and you're sure...

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @Nosebleed p26 what happned -> what happened p35 not even I can't -> not even I can p35 I come to I'm -> I come to, I'm p35 to use set up -> to use // to set up

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @The_Lamb p16 if were possible -> if it were possible

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @anonymousan p20 didn't even have a single -> didn't even have a single friend

Thanks for the chapters! @Contributor Though note that chapter 68 is currently missing on Mangadex.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Waffleidle p4 getting an extra portions -> getting an extra portion // getting extra portions p4 Our precious memories!! It's burning! -> Our precious memories!! They're burning!

The "gyaaaa" -> "gaaaay" scanlator omake was truly inspired.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @MyleneScans p2 rest home for the day -> rest at home for the day p2 It's definitely [...] wasn't it -> It was definitely [...] wasn't it [mixed tenses] p3 Ikezwa -> Ikezawa p4 Din Dong -> Ding Dong p7 just in case though -> just in case...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @fazmkdr p6 was just the way things were -> was just the way of things p8 sharp one kid -> sharp one, kid p8 come with me if you're interested -> come with me if you're interested. p10 that's way worse -> That's way worse p12 Just two copper...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @fazmkdr p6 third's divisions -> third division's p6 fort -> fort. p19 gained an upper hand -> got an upper hand [<-> word repetition with next part: "had little to gain"] p28 benefits me as well -> benefits me as well.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @fazmkdr p23 folliwing -> following p29 give me chills -> gives me chills

If Leiji is to gain his own soulmate trio, what would be the perfect third candidate? Maybe Asmodeus Alice could secretly have a dumb sister or female cousin at the school? We could even adapt the Baka-Clara -> Ba-clara nickname into Baka-Alice -> Bak-alice.