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Ori got reborn! She lost her memories but at least she's back.

This is the Kaguya ending all over again, school children beating up trained body guards for some poorly thought out ending.

Add fonts like Young Dreamer and Subsequent Sparkling. Using mango for everything is dull, should reserve that for when it's loud.

Um, the king didn't execute, exile, or at least punish Duke Lars even after he sent assassins to kill him?

The publisher is the one that reached out to the author. So at least he's not at fault for trying to force his way back into the industry while hiding his name. It was all Shogakukan.

The break all the arms and legs is clealry referring to Miu not Akita.

With her having actual ntr super powers, this seems really gag oriented. I'm guessing we won't ever get a real ntr payoff.

Nah, accidental kisses ain't it. They're as bad as drunk/sleeptalking confessions. Author doesn't want to put in the work to naturally build up to a romance so they throw random ass curve balls.

Well, huge amounts of money being thrown around in stories never affect the plot in any way. So it's really a nothingburger. It's not like there's going to be any arcs of Noel stressing about payments so it's whatever.

So an old man in a loli's body uses a clay strap-on to rape a goddess. There were several lines crossed, but also some not.

Yes, please more development for the girls so we actually want to root for them. Show their confidence, strength, and drive. Not just being horndogs for shota.

Use contractions to make the dialogue feel less stiff. If it can be contracted, contract it. You're, it's, they're, etc.

Oh, so the ridiculous tea leave conspiracy that we were all complaining was actually part of a bigger conspiracy. There's a ton of things still wrong with it, but with this new misunderstanding plot that just got introduced, I'm not holding my breath.

Okay, so his party was fully justified in banishing him. They've been through a lot.

I was kinda reading this for isekai powerfantasy. But that's taken a complete backseat to political maneuvering and wars between natives. I'd rather read three kingdoms or the warring states if this is gonna continue.

Angel is actually a great character to add, someone they can discuss sex stuff with that isn't oblivious (knight), awkward (elf), or a degenerate (imp).

Half your salary is nuts. Especially when he only works one day a week.

Justified crash out tbh. His plan was to publicly reveal everything and the populace would have agreed with him and caused a revolution. Only problem is that he's invoking sins of the father. The prince is innocent in this at the very least. Not sure what the current king has done at all to make...

She wants someone batshit insane enough to kill someone just for her. Saw it in her husband, but has literally seen it now in Gomi.

It's in the text, burnt informant came out to reveal the betrayal, and then everyone outside went inside to check and got caught in an explosion.