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Use contractions to make the dialogue feel less stiff. If it can be contracted, contract it. You're, it's, they're, etc.

Oh, so the ridiculous tea leave conspiracy that we were all complaining was actually part of a bigger conspiracy. There's a ton of things still wrong with it, but with this new misunderstanding plot that just got introduced, I'm not holding my breath.

Okay, so his party was fully justified in banishing him. They've been through a lot.

I was kinda reading this for isekai powerfantasy. But that's taken a complete backseat to political maneuvering and wars between natives. I'd rather read three kingdoms or the warring states if this is gonna continue.

Angel is actually a great character to add, someone they can discuss sex stuff with that isn't oblivious (knight), awkward (elf), or a degenerate (imp).

Half your salary is nuts. Especially when he only works one day a week.

Justified crash out tbh. His plan was to publicly reveal everything and the populace would have agreed with him and caused a revolution. Only problem is that he's invoking sins of the father. The prince is innocent in this at the very least. Not sure what the current king has done at all to make...

She wants someone batshit insane enough to kill someone just for her. Saw it in her husband, but has literally seen it now in Gomi.

It's in the text, burnt informant came out to reveal the betrayal, and then everyone outside went inside to check and got caught in an explosion.

These fonts are pain.

It's all author, editors have to reign in his desire for nudity. It's doubtful that they wouldn't dress the corpse of such a distinguished person after she died protecting everyone so they could give her some dignity, but tits gonna tit.

By the way, It's cock a crossbow, not clock. Or just load if you don't want to use that. Also slight burn was written "sligh burn"

No one will ever appreciate the amount of work it takes to clean page-wide sfx besides someone else who does them. It's a thankless task. I'm sure 99.99% of readers would be fine with the sfx translations in the margins.

This is like, the same plot as Madoka magica. Looping thousands of times but failing to change fate, which reinforces that fate continuously.

So a spirit contract actually gave magic to humans who were magicless. By removing/converting parts of the soul into something that spirits could inhabit/replace. And these voids are passed down by heredity. So someone with attributes in all magic has an incomplete soul that many different types...

She couldn't outrun it anymore because of her leg so she couldn't make it to the spell location. I don't know if she grabbed onto it to steer it to the spell or if she was doing a last ditch effort to fight it and they coincidentally ended up at the spell.

No distance too great.

So her dad is going to impregnate her grandfather who will become genderbent in the future... what

What series?

Something seems wrong. Turner isn't blind, they're "clueless/sightless to their surroundings." They don't read the room or think critically about their actions. At least that's what I'm thinking.