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his dimension magic is so bland, just a vague and illogical cheat power to serve as a convenient crutch for the writer.

In manga it can be very difficult to identify how fast something is supposed to be moving, so I judged based on how quick she was appearing to be moving, injured as she was, relative to them. In relative terms they are slow. If they were relatively fast as you say then they would have caught her...

From an in-story perspective, yes, obviously the skills she has are amazing and useful. From the perspective of a reader they just serve to make the narrative less interesting by mitigating consequences, the scale of conflict, and suspense. Something like this is objectively bad narrative...

It's up to the writer whether she can win without it. We don't know how much raw damage either of their attacks do, the writer just made it up so they can easily just make them do less damage or just give her more health rather than meaninglessly adding an ability that just makes damage even...

I'm sure there are some discrepancies with the novel, but this has a lot of smaller problems. It's very clear that the writer put a lot of effort and thought into it, so major props for that. The concept is good, it's interesting to see someone really having to live as a monster rather than...

It was pretty obvious this was going to happen. Once she realized that they were changing significantly from her and bore random and intense hostility toward the elves she should have immediately killed them when they were split into different bodies. Mind copies that don't serve the main mind...

Cloning someone is leagues beyond everything else that he has used. Even as a fantasy skill its very high fantasy - completely incomparable to status windows. No one else even has supernatural powers, yet he's sparring with a clone of someone out in the open and also using clones to replace...

Not till ch 91. if I remember correctly there were some narrative developments that were interesting to me, but it got to the point that it felt pretty one dimensional and contrived. I commented on that chapter the reason why I dropped. Writer just said "this massive thing happened in the past"...

How is me saying that I'm dropping a series after criticizing it weird? Is it weird for people to say that they didn't finish their food in a review of a restaurant?

The pacing is way too fast. Combat scenes end in the blink of an eye - theres not nearly enough time to feel any kind of tension. The worldbuilding is lackluster. Everything has revolved around the mc so far. Setting and other characters have been glossed over. It really gives the vibes of a...

He killed millions of gods? Really looks like this is going to be another extremely shallow power fantasy with an edgelord mc.

That is so ridiculous. What is the knight trying to accomplish? It makes absolutely no sense. "I sided with a bandit that kills women and children so I could kill this guy you like, now marry me!" This has to be one of the stupidest scenes I have ever seen. Guy is literally nothing but a...

Its extremely bizarre that a knight would act on his own like this. It doesn't make any sense from a political standpoint. He's speaking on behalf of the house he serves like he's a head of it. It'd make sense if he were executed for such a thing.

Did pendragon end up in his body then? This narrative is so weird.

This whole situation is weird. The identity thievery itself is one thing, you have his whole family believing that its the boy pendragon so it feels wrong. His previous character was so much more compelling. The whole time I was expecting him to just get up and fight to the end at least. I mean...

It's not an assumption, they don't move fast. For one, your elephants comparison is not relevant, they're not elephants they're giant hunks of metal with two legs. If you just look at what's happening, they are shambling this whole time. The only reason she couldn't outrun them is because she...

Maybe he wouldn't have been able to do it, but the fact that he refused to try is clearly the problem, I really don't get what your point is

the clone power is a bit too supernatural and out of place. I thought that only he could interact with it and see it so I didn't think it was all that unnatural, but the fact that he can straight up clone people is weird. It's really contrived.

His arrogance is a bit annoying and idk why he's always getting into weird situations with his sister

That's a really weird ability