bruhhhh,, the idea of the plot was all right and interesting but how the author's carrying out the story is a no no ;(
art's great most of the time,
sometimes plot is nice but
too many awkward bits in the plot kinda brings it down a notch.
i hope they would explain the conflict between oni and momotaro in more detail lmao, because from the readers point of view their motive isnt very good...