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You know, it occurs to me that a lot of these misunderstandings could've been completely avoided if Sô's mother had been forthcoming to the school about his "near-total amnesia" and how he's subsequently shown a total lack of any knowledge or instincts about what everyone in this world takes for...

So... I guess this fan-coloring project is not just dead, it's stillborn? A shame, really.

You're talking real-life ethics. This isn't real life, this is porn, and escapist porn at that, full of wish fulfillment, narrative-driven breaks from reality, and all sorts of other tropes; what you're complaining about is just Tuesday within the manga/anime porn world, so you're just making a...

Oh sure, and I suppose all the pages of her monologuing weak-ass justifications to herself for why it's OK to do it "just once" don't exist at all. Saying "pot calling the kettle black" would ignore the fact that here, only the pot is black and the kettle is gleamingly shiny.

It doesn't like she's telling a prophecy, she sounds like she's retelling an already happened event.

@Geako On page 3, the monologue keeps changing from present tense to past tense in the second and third parts.

Fair enough. You'll let us know the next time you upload a chapter? Since, you know, the site doesn't tell us when an already uploaded chapter has any of its pages changed.

I don't think it's her, actually; she seemed pretty satisfied with the yukionna she's now with last time we saw her. Remember those people from a few chapters ago that were scheming? I think one of them put Haru in some illusory world within his head, a la Infinite Tsukuyomi from Naruto or the...

Cross-quoting from the thread for Ch.155, since the quote is about this chapter. I've edited some of the page numbers, since they were off. @Geako In case you somehow missed it, since you didn't seem to acknowledge these in the other thread.

@Geako I concur with Dimox.

Yeah, I've tried drawing their attention to many of these errors, but oftentimes they never seem to acknowledge them or they decide they're "too minor" to be worth the effort, and thus they remain.

@Geako page 3: "guardians" doesn't make sense in the slightest, it should be "guardees" (i.e. the people being guarded). Also, who's saying the last speech bubble? It has Hinata's orange color, but the wavy outline and the content implies it's Kanaria.

@Velev "then the young lady won't see it" どこぞの小娘 in this context should basically translate to "a certain girl", referring to the childhood friend.

No no, the second be like the first want but with the emotion being "Panik Excited" INAFF! :ROFLMAO:

So she should get a pass for her shitty behavior just because she has huge boobs? No thank you. You wouldn't know shitty writing if it smacked you in the face like a brick.

It's not so bullshit when you remember that she did have a shippy moment with the original version of this character in the official dôjin, though he was much more realistically sized (in fact, he was shorter than her) and is drawn with an actual face. He is definitely Tall, considering he's...

Gonna be completely frank: If I were writing this kind of story, I would've had a single panel of still silence right after Kuroiwa's forced-out confirmation, followed immediately by the same panel but with the guy abruptly standing up. He then silently picks up his things, slams his share of...

I'm glad I'm not the only one who got confused by the usage of "pare" here.

What "promise" is she talking about? Did she suffer some hallucination from her Sô withdrawal over the past 3 days? She'd probably beg him to put a new baby in her belly before he leaves, so that she can maintain her sanity. What's this about R18!Miku's mom? I don't remember this despite being...

It's honestly both refreshing and surprising to see someone as meticulous as I am with constructive criticism of fan translations. Even more impressive is the fact that you're much more elaborate in your explanation than I would've been.