What? Some prick just shows up and immediately smashes her window?
Doesn't knock. Doesn't yell.
Just blow his head off. In fact, why didn't the wolves attack him? Maybe they're out hunting.
This was neat but I really, REALLY can't be arsed to jump through a million hoops for each chapter.
Hopefully when it's finished someone mass uploads it somewhere.
Seems to me this is one of those stories with a very good premise, very good first few chapters but then they just have to go full generic and get rid of everything that made it stand out.
Maybe I'm wrong, but that's what this feels like right now.