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the protagonist keeps on running into people who OBVIOUSLY need help, then proceeds to fuckin ignore them until they almost die. like the dipshit is seemingly incapable of being even a bit proactive. its an absolutely infuriating way to tell a story.

also, the protagonist is borderline retarded. honestly, this is kinda shit tier overall. a waste of a goo idea, and it not like the idea was even unique to this storyl

cool idea, but the grammar is so dogshit its barely readable.

the wolf character is so unbelievably mentally challenged that it makes the story almost unreadable. i dont know is she was supposed to be funny......but she wasnt.

any enjoyment i could possibly find with this story is ruined by the main character being a braindead fucking moron.

yet another pathetic beta loser protagonist. great. do japanese people actually relate to garbage like this?

this is pure garbage. like i get wanting to write what is essentially porn, but why.....this?

annnnnnd he's a beta loser. fuckin WHY?

do people actually enjoy this beta loser nonsense?

im only early on so it probably changes, but he's even more of an incel beta than the game character he was mocking in the first chapter. like i get there needs to be room for character growth but he's so goddamn cringe its hard to keep reading. dude is fuckin pathetic,a loser AND stupid.